Wraith

One Dark night, many awoke to a flash of light in the forest, accompanied by a cry so terrible and loud, some went deaf from hearing it. The Phantom that emerged from the forest that night, draped in darkness, roamed aimlessly, killing everything in sight. Some, though, thought the phantom cound be caught. So, they build a machine fast enough to catch it, and waited untill nightfall. Now all they need is for someone to man the machine, and put an end to the Wraith.

Now, with that out of the way, this is my second attempt at a GCI, and i hink i finnaly figured out the transitions typically seen on GCI's. I do think there are some parts that are a little too flat, or fast paced, but i think it turned out well.